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November 2nd, 2011

Telling Your Own Story

by Johanna Harness


“If we don’t tell our stories, they will be told by people who do not understand them at all.”

Teresa Jordan’s words resonate with me, both as a writer and as a teacher.  I was very lucky to hear her speak at Women Writing and Living The West, a one-day seminar held in conjunction with the 15th Annual Trailing of The Sheep Festival.  During the first workshop segment, professional writers read from and talked about their work.  No doubt about it, they were good.  But the second set of speakers?  They were ranching women, speaking from the heart, many of them for the first time—and they overshadowed their professional counterparts.  The authors may have inspired us, but the ranching women made us cheer and cry.

I bring this up now for a reason.  We are entering the season of NaNoWriMo or, for the uninitiated, National Novel Writing Month.  The program is run by a nonprofit group and has proven itself through twelve full seasons of madness.  They started as a small group of crazy novelists and they’ve become. . . Well, they’ve become a very large group of crazy novelists. At the end of last year, NaNoers numbered 200,530. In the Young Writers Program, there were 1,740 participating classrooms and 41,000 novel writers under the age of seventeen.  Every year, the program grows.

The goal, as you may surmise, is to write the rough draft of a novel in November. Through the program, writers get encouragement, support, and structure—and, although donations are thankfully accepted, it costs nothing to participate.

I love this. I love this so much I could jot all the reasons on little pieces of paper and roll around in them.

My reasons have everything to do with who I am and my experience.

I’m a teacher. I’m a writer. I’m a woman with deep roots in a land often misunderstood and misrepresented. I’ve taught hundreds of college students who do not believe they have any right to use their own voices because they are not the voices they see represented in the mainstream of life.  They are gay. Or their skin is too dark or too light or too blotchy or too scarred.  They talk funny or they don’t talk funny enough.  They live in the back woods. Or they haven’t lived anywhere long enough to fit in. They’ve been taught it’s not polite to talk about oneself.  They’ve been taught that creative endeavors are a waste of time. They’ve been taught to mirror opinions rather than risk failure by speaking their minds. They’ve been dismissed because they’re not from a place others can readily find on a map.  They’re afraid.

You know what?  To hell with that.  To hell with anyone who tells others they shouldn’t have voices. Words are power.  When we allow someone to take away our voices, we are allowing them to take away our power.

There will be nay-sayers.  As NaNoWriMo grows, there is a growing anti-NaNo contingent who discourage participation.  They say we don’t need any more poorly-written books.  They say not everyone should write.  They say real writing should be left to real writers. I’m reminded of Robert Frost’s “Two Tramps in Mudtime.”  In the poem, our protagonist is chopping his own wood when two tramps come by needing work:

Out of the woods two hulking tramps
(From sleeping God knows where last night,
But not long since in the lumber camps.)
They thought all chopping was theirs of right.
Men of the woods and lumberjacks,
They judged me by their appropriate tool.
Except as a fellow handled an ax,
They had no way of knowing a fool.

It’s true.  If you have little experience owning your voice, you may be called a fool by those with more experience.  Those people have no other way to understand what you are doing other than the way you handle an ax (or in this case, grammar or sentence structure or imagery).  In this time of flux in the publishing industry, there are plenty who argue that the flood of self-published works by amateur writers has become a threat to the livelihood of “real writers.”

In August, The Atlantic ran an article by Peter Osnos, entitled, “Are There Too Many Books?” Osnos responds to Bill Keller, an op-ed columnist for The New York Times, and author of an article entitled, “Let’s Ban Books, Or At Least Stop Writing Them.”  Keller laments the number of his reporting staff asking for leaves of absence to write these things and Osnos agrees weakly, placing blame on publishers who need to use better judgement with their selections. He then goes on to say that the real problem lies with self-publishing.  His analysis:  “the quality of the few tends to be overwhelmed by the dross of many.”

Wow.  Dross.

Here’s where I differ:  I think audiences are smart. I don’t personally know anyone who has stopped reading because “OMG I JUST CAN’T DECIDE! I’M SO OVERWHELMED!”

I would boldly suggest that the “dross of the many” contains voices of real people, many of whom have been shouted down their whole lives.  I would even more-boldly suggest that the experience of writing and claiming voice is worth whatever discomfort someone writing for The Atlantic or The New York Times may feel. I lay claim to this territory not as a self-published author, but as a teacher and a writer and a woman with deep roots in a land often misunderstood and misrepresented.  We have stories to tell and it’s time they’re told.

National Novel Writing Month is a great place to start.

 

November 2nd, 2010

Before you trash your outline

by Johanna Harness

It’s day two of NaNoWriMo and I hear rumblings of getting-started issues.

Before you trash the outline you’ve so carefully crafted, consider Point of View (POV) first:

1.  Are you writing in the correct POV to tell the story you want to tell? You don’t have to change your story to match the POV.  You can change the POV to match the story. You’re a writer doing magic and this is one the tools of your trade.

Maybe 1st person doesn’t work for this piece.  Maybe 3rd person doesn’t work.  Are you writing this from the perspective of the right character?

2.  If you are writing in 3rd person, are you settling into one or two heads or are you head-hopping from one to another? A lot of new writers head-hop.  (I did.  I liked it.  I didn’t want anyone telling me to stop.)

If you head-hop, you have to write a lot of phrases like “she thought he was gorgeous. . .” and “he noticed how she couldn’t stop looking at him.”  If you don’t head-hop.  You can say, “Delicious from leather boots to belt to. . . oh god, those eyes.  He tilted his head toward her, smiled, and her knees quivered.”

You don’t have to say who thought he was hot because you’re staying in the woman’s head.  Clearly he sees her, clearly he notices her, but you don’t have to be in his head to say that.

Or maybe you’re in his head:  “The woman at the bar kept sizing him up, probably thought him a mark, probably planned to roll him and take his money just like the last bitch.  When he got her alone, she’d see that flashing her legs at him wasn’t such a good idea.  He tilted his head and smiled.”

At the very least, if you are going to write both perspectives, separate them with a # marker, so the reader won’t be so confused.  Keep in mind what each character knows about the scene and keep them straight.

3.  If POV is the issue or you think it might be the issue, take some time to write the same intro in a few different ways.  Try on some different possibilities before you commit yourself any more to this path.

SO POV isn’t the problem?  Back to the outline then.  (BTW, I rarely outline.  I do big boards, phase drafting, and cluster plotting, but actual outlining has never worked for me.  I use the word outline here to mean PLAN.)

1.  Do you know the beginning and end? The beginning is the point when everything changes.  The end is the point where the main plot is resolved.

2.  Do you know how your main character gets from the beginning to the end? I’m talking about the main turning points, not every beat in the story?  Do you have that? This is the through-line.

3.  Do you have an opening scene that makes the reader want to be in your main character’s head? Does your character do something or say something that makes the reader take his/her hand for the rest of the novel?

If you have those things, carry on.  Do not go back and rewrite your entire novel plan.  There’s no need.  You’re on solid ground.

If you’re having trouble getting from one turning point to the next, you may need to know your character better.  You may not be sure how your character would get from one point to the next because you need more information.  Stop and interview your character.  Draw sketches.  Ask basic questions.  Do role playing.  Explore the motivations.  Ask yourself:  why does my character care about what happens?  What does my character hope to get out of this?  The better you know your character, the better you’ll be able to move that from point A to point B.

If you’re struggling right now, the plan for the book is probably secondary to something else.  Explore your options, have fun, and keep writing!

October 23rd, 2010

Writing a NaNo Anthology of Friday Flash

by Johanna Harness

In Readers are Everything, I wrote about posting short stories as gifts to readers.  Develop an audience by giving away writing of quality.

Time management becomes an issue.  If I let myself, I could spend all week preparing for one Friday flash and then the rest of the week responding to comments and reading the stories of others. While this would be fun, I would no longer be working on my novels.

My solution?  NaNoWriMo.

If I write 50K words of short stories, I’ll have a year’s worth of stories for my website.

I wasn’t sure this was a legit idea for NaNo, but I’d heard of NaNo Rebels, so I pursued it anyway.  Being a rebel sounds nice, yeah? Then I read “Am I a rebel?” and I was kind of disappointed to find out I’m probably not.

This is from the above link:

  • I’m writing a collection of short stories. Am I a rebel?
    Probably not. There’s no actual rule on this one. We define a novel as “a lengthy work of fiction.” However, we the moderators feel that since you find short story collections on the shelves alongside longer works of fiction, if they’re related, they count. They need to have some common theme, or linking thread that weaves them together that makes them a single, “lengthy work of fiction.” Which leads us to the next:
  • I’m writing a series of unrelated essays/short stories/vignettes. Am I a rebel?
    Probably. Again, there’s no official rule on this one, but if you’re just combining unrelated work to get the 50k, it’s probably not a novel.

So the only tiny, little problem I have:  the idea is quite likely a scrunchy little bit of INSANITY.

I’ve written novels quickly.  One scene leads to another, the whole book gains momentum, and words flow.  Stories are cute little monsters that devour entire days in the writing of 300 words.

So I waited to announce my intention until I tested the water.  For three weeks, I’ve been building up to writing two stories per day.  These aren’t for inclusion in the NaNo anthology. This is water-testing. This is strength-building.

I still don’t know if I can do it.

One story a day almost killed me the first week. Then I added one story plus a story built on a novel outtake (again, these results are not for NaNo). Finally, I worked up to writing two original stories a day.  This required serious stretching and anguish, but I did it.  And yet, even working at this level, I’m not sure I’ll make it to 50K.

But you know what?  My exploration and strength training resulted in 19 stories written in Claire’s world. I’ve posted four of them on Claire’s website. If I write like hell all through NaNo, I’m going to have the results I want, even if I don’t meet the 50K.

And you know what else?  That means I can start writing novels again on December 1st. Once a week I’ll edit a story and get it ready for the site, but I won’t need to write new short stories while I’m working on a novel.  (And honestly, it’s difficult for me to work on anything else when I’m absorbed in a novel.)

If this works, I can take a break from traditional novel writing to write another anthology next November.

What do you think?  Anyone want to write their own anthology while I’m writing mine?

And hey–no matter what you’re writing, rebel or not, If you’re crazy enough to attempt 50K in a month, I’d love to be your NaNo buddy.  My identity there is same as twitter: johannaharness.  Tweet me and I’ll be sure to add you back.

Let the games begin (you know, soonish).


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